by Ratandeep Satwant Singh

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December 31, 2008

The Act of Making Love

July 12, 2012 09:34 AM UTC

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Sudden desire -

Feverish whim,

Sensuous touch,

Succulent perch,

Grim pleasure,

Moments treasured,

Tensile expressions,

Fervent intonations,

Steady passion,

Deviant exploration.

Sublimity aglow,

Transient cresendo.

Fulminant plosion

of unbridled emotion.

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Comments: 18

John Doyle Jul 12, 2012, 10:43am UTC

Well done

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 11:41am UTC

Thank you very much, John!

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Angela A. Jul 12, 2012, 11:02am UTC

That was a great read

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Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 11:41am UTC

Thank you very much, Angela!

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Kevin E. Jul 12, 2012, 1:10pm UTC

Certainly your work grabs your reader's attention.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 1:22pm UTC

Thank you very much, Kevin!

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Otelia S. Jul 12, 2012, 1:36pm UTC

Sounds good to me! Thanks so much for sharing.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 1:39pm UTC

Thank you very much, Otelia!

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David Prosser Jul 12, 2012, 2:23pm UTC

Sorry Hurree, my memory just isn't that good .

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 2:49pm UTC

:-)

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Ann Marcaida Jul 12, 2012, 3:41pm UTC

Great job of building up the tension and bringing images to mind with your unusual work choice. A little deviance is good.

Thanks for sharing with Gather's Luminous Writers and Artists. Featured and tweeted.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 6:28pm UTC

Thank you very much for the feature and the tweet, Ann!

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Mylinda Elliott Jul 12, 2012, 3:50pm UTC

Very good, you certainly grabbed my attention.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 12, 2012, 6:29pm UTC

Thank you very much, Mylinda!

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ʚϊɞ Carol ʚϊɞ Jul 13, 2012, 9:36am UTC

Lots of emotion.

Thanks for sharing with The Surreal Circus.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 13, 2012, 10:57am UTC

Thank you, Carol!

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Jean R B. Jul 15, 2012, 3:00am UTC

That is the act of love indeed.

Ratandeep Satwant Singh Jul 15, 2012, 5:48am UTC

Thank you very much, Jean!

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